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Post by Beth on Feb 20, 2008 22:54:03 GMT -5
I've actually got about half of the next part written. I guess I must have had my Wheaties this week ;D I have ideas about where I'm going with this, but what I want to know is, for those of you that have been reading (thank you, btw ), where would you like to see it go? Any place in particular? What's working? What's not? I love feedback, and constructive criticism is always welcome. Oh, and I take requests
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Post by Niki on Feb 21, 2008 9:43:52 GMT -5
Yay! I can't wait! Keep eating those Wheaties. Hmmm....I'm really liking where you're taking it. I'd like to see Jonathan get help and grow more confident around Amanda. Overall I think it's doing great. As for requests, can you please involve JR in some sort of Michael Jackson Pepsi commercial-like incident where his hair is burned off? I'm so sick of the long hair. Someone singe it off, at least fictionally. And death to Ava.
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Barbara
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Post by Barbara on Feb 21, 2008 9:46:23 GMT -5
I really don't have an idea of where I want the s/l to go, I just don't want it to end. I realize you are a busy woman, but I hope it is an ongoing project for you. Since we won't have Jonathan on the screen, your fan fiction will help fill the void for me. I can't think of anything that is not working for me. I love the past childhood history that is brought out in dreams. I also love the interaction between Jon and Ryan. You keep Jonathan on the front burner through your terrific writing.
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Post by Beth on Feb 21, 2008 12:31:08 GMT -5
Thanks for your feedback, Niki and Barbara I really appreciate it! Without giving too much away, I think I can accommodate most of those things And believe me, if there's a way to torture JR and/or Ava, I'll be happy to oblige. ;D
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